Hello im new here!!! Im making a CreepyPasta called, "The Lamb of God". I think it's pretty gorey. Will that over abundance of gore possibly ruin the story?? Because it seems like it's purpose is just for shock value. I don't want it to seem like that
You kind of answer your own question here; overused gore comes off as silly and only being there for the shock value. Sure, it’s a shocking story element, but it has to be done right. If you would like someone to read it over and give you a review, you can post it to the writer’s workshop.