How do I make stories better? I mean I made a story on spinpasta, Happypasta and they didn't delete them!
How do I make stories better? I mean I made a story on spinpasta, Happypasta and they didn't delete them!
If you actually want to make your stories better (which it doesn't sound like you do) then you'll take criticism as a gift and learn how to improve your writing instead of stamping your feet like a child and insisting everyone adore your subpar output. We try to be welcoming and supportive here, but you have to be open to criticism and want to improve. It doesn't sound like you're mature enough to do that.
Look up writing resources. There are many out there. Take their lessons to heart. Learn to look at your writing objectively.
Or just continue to post bad writing in spaces where you'll never be challenged. Sure, it will be easier, but you'll never improve that way and your writing will never be taken seriously outside of those spaces. Your choice.
When you post on a public forum, you invite the input of anyone who wishes to add something. You don't get to control that. You cannot get your way everywhere all the time. That kind of spoiled behavior may work at home or with your parents, but you're not going to get away with it here.
You should probably take people's advice if you really want to improve.
So what? No one has to care how angry you get. Welcome to growing up.
You asked a question and you don't like the answers you're getting. They're not going to change because you get angry and throw a temper tantrum. No one here is at the mercy of your emotions.
TheAwsomeBoii wrote: Dude stop. Do you want me to expose you on youtube?
TheAwsomeBoii, stop this. You asked how to improve your stories on a public forum. You were offered advice and appear unwilling to accept it. You do not get to tell others to shut up when their points are valid and you do not get to threaten others, as nonthreatening as an "exposed" video on Youtube is. If this behaviour continues, there will be repercussions.
STOP REPLYING!
I swear it was a bad idea to go on this website. I'm getting a movie about myself and everybody is just being a holes. I just stopped a bully last month and now I have to deal with more. Nobody remembers this is the story of my life right now! I'm freaking tried of getting bullied!