Hello, dear. As you can clearly see, I am AGrimAuxiliatrix1, a self-proclaimed writer and critic. If you want me to read one of your stories and make a full critique of it, feel free to ask (although my schedule has been fairly busy). I've written 14 stories so far, and I've written over 60 in-depth reviews of various pastas. All of my critiques and Creepypastas can be found in the links below.
Vampire Depiction made by TheonlyFanTazy (right):
My Stories (Chronological Order)
Take a look at SnakeTongue237's Top 10 List (out of my first 14) stories:
Forgive Me- 2015 Creepypasta Freestyle Contest Entry. Subject: Back from the dead.
The Buzzing- 2015 Creepypasta Freestyle Contest Finalist. Winner of Group C. Subject: Technical Difficulties.
The Magician's Game- My personal favorite of my stories. Nominated for Pasta of the Month in September 2015.
My Parents Weren't Meant to Be Together- CrazyWords' Writing Contest Entry. Subject: Divorce.
Walk With Me- SnakeTongue237's Title Writing Contest Entry. The title was clearly "Walk With Me".
A Perfect Memory- My favorite short pasta I have wrote. Nominated for Pasta of the Month sometime in Spring 2015, my memory isn't the best.
A Game of Impostors- CrazyWords' Writing Contest Finalist Entry. Subject: An ordinary man's hallucinations. Sequel to "The Magician's Game".
Wednesday Night- Odd story behind this one. I originally made it to represent my feelings on Stephen King's stories: Great build-up with little payoff. I later realized that it was stupid to intentionally make a story with a poor ending, so I then deleted the story, only to republish it in this much improved version the next day.
In-depth Critiques: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:AGrimAuxiliatrix1/My_Critiques
Critiques Continued: 
The Pastel Man (Note: given recent information about the writer of this story, Vincent V Cava, and Mr. Creepypasta coming to light, I've chosen to remove links to Cava's work excluding this one. I continue to love many of Cava's stories, but unless the allegations against him are proven untrue, then I wouldn't feel very comfortable supporting him or MCP.)
Nightingale (Since removed, as it is going to be published)