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Highest Rated Stories

1/ Penpal (By 1000Vultures)
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2/ He Was a New Man (By HumboldtLycanthrope)
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3/ Finally Awake (By Kyoketsu)
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4/ Ad Nauseam, Ad Mortem, Ad Infinitum (By EmpyrealInvective)
Scare Factor88Transition87Composition97Description90Conclusion93Overall91
5/ The Shadow Girl (By Omegaokami)
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6/ Innocent Souls (By DEFSeattle)
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7/ Flower Eyes and Needle Teeth (By Hopefullygoodgramar)
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8/ I Think My Son Is Going to Kill Himself (By SamMarduk)
Scare Factor90Transition93Composition91Description84Conclusion91Overall89.8
9/ Emily's Basement (By Trystabr)
Scare Factor94Transition86Composition87Description86Conclusion94Overall89.4
10/ Patient Zero (By GarbageFactory)
Scare Factor87Transition97Composition85Description84Conclusion93Overall89.2
11/ Fog (By Josef K.)
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12/ Nana Razor (By Booboofinger)
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13/ Scenes from a Metropolitan Garbage Truck (By Mystreve)
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14/ The Light and the Little (By Jaaaaz)
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15/ The Baseball Boy (By Robotkat)
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16/ Out with a Bang (By XanCrews)
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17/ Comfort in Numbers (By TerraRow)
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Rating Info

Scare Factor
Overall creepiness, depending on the atmosphere, setting, tone, concepts involved, and originality.

A general assessment of the pace, timing, and sentence flow. Missing context will negatively impact this rating.

While figuring this rating, I ask myself these questions: Is there realistic concepts/events? Do they fit in with the storyline, or do they seem out of place? Are they distinct? Do they draw interest?

A measurement of how well the characters/events are described. Going overboard in imagery (commonly, with adverbs) will negatively impact this writing. Not giving enough details, when not leaving suspense, will negatively impact this rating also.

How the conclusion fits with the rest of the story. If the ending is too abrupt (as many are), predictable, or drawn out, that will negatively impact this rating.

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LunaLittleBird LunaLittleBird 55 minutes ago

How many words?

Hey so I am writing a creepypasta and I want to know on average how many words are used for one sto…

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The End is Neigh

to make things obvious, i hate the websites errors.

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Claudia Mordrake Claudia Mordrake 6 days ago

First Blog

I have no idea if anyone will read this.

I guess I just need a way to process this. Without it being…

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SkullcrawlerBuddy SkullcrawlerBuddy 17 days ago


Just quickly wanted to make it known that it's my birthday today!

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Tropicalrougeprecure Tropicalrougeprecure 26 days ago


I could see a light is it hope no it’s creepypastas yes it is I shouldn’t have done that

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Adrithegalaxy Adrithegalaxy 27 days ago


How do I post a pasta or edit a page? Im new here and it says I do not have permission to.

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I have a certain question

So I know this might break the ToS (Sorry, I just made this account) and I didn't exactly see anyth…

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Astrallium Astrallium 11 May

First Blog

Tue, May 11, 2:54 am

Hello, this is my first blog. I'm pretty tired right now but i'm just gonna in…

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DoctorBleed DoctorBleed 8 May

Need help figuring out Workshop

Every since the writer's workshop changed around, I'm having trouble parsing the features. I don't …

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