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Vngel W

aka Vngel

  • I live in APEIRON
  • My occupation is A GUIDE
  • I am A KNOWLEDGE SEEKER
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It was a Tuesday, I can't remember the date but it was a few
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years ago now. I'd just got off work and I was stopping by the regular market.
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A quaint store just down the road from my place. I got all the necessities and
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was on my way to the counter when it caught my eye, a box of Fruit Loops.
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Glimmering under light from the white bulbs, at an absolute steal of a price.
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$2 dollars, for a 500g box, it was a miracle. A once in a lifetime deal,
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something humankind would ever see again. So I bought two boxes of God's cereal
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and headed for home.
   
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I placed the boxes on the bench, looking over the receipt. I
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still couldn't believe how cheap they were. This thought stayed with me as I
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packed away the rest of my groceries and had dinner. I couldn't take my eyes
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off the boxes, they called to me, like some unattainable goal I would never
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reach. My mouth watered at the thought of ingesting their sugary goodness. I
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had a shower and went to bed, dreaming of tomorrow morning when I would be able
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to eat the loops.
   
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A loud bump from downstairs woke me in the middle of the
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night. A solid but meaty thump, like flesh against wood... Except I had tile. I
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grabbed my 20 gauge and crept into the hall, the dark played tricks on my eyes,
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the shadows all casting the same fluttering shapes along the walls. I made my
==About Me==
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way down the stairs, beads of sweat forming on the back of my neck as I
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approached the floor.
   
My first introduction to CreepyPastas was in 2013 through a YouTube narration channel called [https://www.youtube.com/user/HauntingSeason ''Haunting Season'']. Ironically, the host didn't read your ''typical'' CP classics. In fact, all of the stories were not only really good but they were his own. It wasn't until later that I discovered the likes of CreepsMcPasta, Mr. CreepyPasta, and eventually, a ton of other talented narrators. From there, I found my way to this site, and the rest wrote itself (pun intended).
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I saw it standing there, a horribly deformed eldritch
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horror. It stood as tall as my ceiling, maybe taller as it hunched over my kitchen
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bench. It had no legs, a snake-like body clad in leathery white skin. His body
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forming into a neck and head, with a giant nose and clad in an aged bicycle
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helmet. A singular arm hoisted a box over its gaping mouth. My Fruit Loops and
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one box was already empty.
   
Since I was young, I've always been captivated by the art of storytelling: the characters, the journey, and the overall impression it would leave upon the reader. Did the character succeed in their quest? Did their pain resonate with you? Or their joy? Their fears? These types of feelings— to establish a bond with a fictional character— still amaze me to this day.
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I watched on in horror as it finished my second box of loops
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and contorted it's horrific body to look at me. "Provide me with loops,
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brother." I gasped for air, it's oppressive gaze sapped the life from my
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legs, and the shotgun clattered to the ground. I couldn't move, I couldn't see,
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but I could think one thing alone. I had to acquire loops.
   
Naturally, I wanted to capture that "feeling", replicate it, and provoke those raw emotions in others. It’s a challenge I aim to achieve and why I love to write. The overall process is something I enjoy: from brainstorming right down to the last letter I type. In turn, I hope that you’ll find enjoyment in my work and I thank you for taking the time to read them!
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And so I write this tale, to tell you about the Long-Nosed
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Nobody. And if you see the Long-Nosed Nobody, do not fear, just provide him
[[File:Imagination.gif|thumb|"Imagination!"]]
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with LOOPS.
The best thing about imagination is that it's endless. There are a ridiculous amount of ways to go about something which is why, for the most part, I can see the gem in almost any story and what the author is trying to accomplish. I like to give feedback on stories, especially ones where authors do an excellent job of painting their canvas with their words.
 
 
I'm big on continuity in a story though and it's a major pet-peeve when I see authors introduce something without properly addressing it again (I say ''properly'' because some ambiguity is nice ''when'' done right!). A good plot is a no-brainer, but bonus points for sliding in a good ol' helping of character development.
 
 
I look forward to finding and adding more gems to my "favorites" list. So, if you have a recommendation that's buried in the 11,000+ stories hosted here, then drop me a link on my talk page! While you're at it, check out some of my own work. What good is dishing out feedback, if you can't take it yourself? Let me know if anything I write becomes one of your favorites! That or if maybe I should quit writing...
 
 
==Stories Marked for Review==
 
[[:Category:Marked for Review|There{{#ifeq:{{#expr:{{PAGESINCATEGORY:Marked for Review}} - 3}}|1|'s|&nbsp;are}} {{#expr:{{PAGESINCATEGORY:Marked for Review}} - 3}} {{#ifeq:{{#expr:{{PAGESINCATEGORY:Marked for Review}} - 3}}|1|page|pages}} marked for review]]
 
 
==Currently Reading (Physical Books)==
 
 
◾'''EdgeDancer''' by Brandon Sanderson
 
 
==To-Read List (Physical Books)==
 
 
◾'''Kind Nepenthe''' by Matthew V. Brockmeyer
 
 
◾'''Oathbringer''' by Brandon Sanderson
 
 
◾'''Dreamer of the Deep''' by Travis Kuhlman
 
 
==Finished Reading (Physical Books)==
 
◾'''The Way of Kings''' by Brandon Sanderson
 
 
◾'''Words of Radiance''' by Brandon Sanderson
 
 
◾'''Winter Agent Juno #1: The Helios Legacy''' by Mike MacDee
 
 
◾'''Half A King''' by Joe Abercrombie
 
 
◾'''Half A World''' by Joe Abercrombie
 
 
◾'''Winter Agent Juno #2: Kingdom of Famine''' by Mike MacDee
 
 
==My Stories==
 
 
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File:ChurchPhoto.jpg|<center>'''[[The Church in the Woods]]:'''</center><center>A technician is sent to assist a client at an old church deep in the woods.</center>|link=The Church in the Woods
 
 
File:Occam_Cobb.jpg|<center>'''[[The Great Occam Cobb]]''':</center> <center>Meet the greatest magician to ever exist.</center>|link=The Great Occam Cobb
 
 
File:Fox.jpg|<center>'''[[Foxes Don't Ask Questions]]''': </center><center>A routine extraction for a team of soldiers quickly turns into a battle of survival against an otherworldly entity.</center>|link=Foxes Don't Ask Questions
 
 
File:Insula.jpg|<center>'''[[Insula]]''':</center> <center>A space-mining ship unearths a horrifying discovery that threatens to consume the crew.</center>|link=Insula
 
 
File:Chione_2.jpg|<center>'''[[The Dryad of the Woods]]''':</center><center>A group of travelers become trapped on a mountain with an ancient entity that terrorizes them.</center>|link=The Dryad of the Woods
 
 
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=='''Works in Progress''': ==
 
 
◾'''Daughters of the Goddess''' (Currently in progress) -- ''sequel to The Dryad of the Woods''
 
 
◾'''The Orb of Anamnesis''' (Delayed) -- ''sequel to Insula''
 
 
◾'''The Curators of Gen''' (Delayed)
 
 
==Narrations:==
 
 
 
 
<center>'''The Great Occam Cobb:'''</center><gallery widths="315" columns="2">
 
 
File:'The Great Occam Cobb Part 1' Written by Vngel W | Narrated by Captain FrightNite
 
File:"The Great Occam Cobb - Part 2" Written by Vngel W | Narrated by Captain FrightNite
 
File:"The Great Occam Cobb - Part 3" Written by Vngel W | Narrated by Captain FrightNite
 
File:"The Great Occam Cobb - Part 4" Written by Vngel M | Narrated by Captain FrightNite
 
 
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<center>'''The Church in the Woods:'''</center><gallery widths="315" columns="2">
 
 
File:"The Church in the Woods The Dream" Part 1 Creepypasta | Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
File:"The Church in the Woods Congregation Room" Pt 2 Creepypasta| Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
File:"The Church in the Woods The Book" Part 3 Creepypasta| Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
File:"The Church in the Woods The Ritual" Part 4 - Creepypasta| Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
File:"The Church in the Woods The White Eye" Part 5 Creepypasta Finale| Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
File:"The Church in the Woods" Complete Creepypasta| Narrated by Creepy Ghost Stories
 
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<center>'''Foxes Don't Ask Questions:'''</center><gallery widths="315">
 
File:"Foxes Don't Ask Questions"|Narrated by NaturesTemper
 
 
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==Stories I Enjoyed==
 
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*[[Pasta Noir: Dames, Slugs and the Hatchetman]]
 
*[[Fleshgait]]
 
*[[Borrasca]]
 
*[[Borrasca V]]
 
*[[Crucifix]]
 
*[[From Deep Within]]
 
*[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/I%27m_a_Search_and_Rescue_Officer_for_the_US_Forest_Service,_I_have_some_stories_to_tell I'm a Search and Rescue Officer...]
 
*[[What Is Your Pleasure?]]
 
*[[The Last Day of October|The Last Day of October Series]]
 
*[[NoEnd House]]
 
*[[Secret Bar]]
 
*[[Crossroad: Night Rain|The Crossroad series]]
 
*[[Malodorous]]
 
*[[Doll Parts]]
 
*[[The Feind House |The Lenoresfield Series]]
 
*[[All Too Human|All Too Human Series]]
 
*[[Harvest | The Harvest series]]
 
*[[The Possession Complex]]
 
*[[The Great God Pan]]
 
*[[The Abattoir Concerto]]
 
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*[[Burnin' Down the Ozarks]]
 
*[[Heavy Rain]]
 
*[[Behind Closed Doors]]
 
*[[The Well, the Wheel, and Wilhelm]]
 
*[[Magda - A Dark Christmas Tale]]
 
*[[That Moon of Mine]]
 
*[[Ascension]]
 
*[[Hard Reset]]
 
*[[A Sunset in Texas]]
 
*[[Banshee's Cry]]
 
*[[Destined to Survive]]
 
*[[I Met God Today]]
 
*[[Built to Be Loved]]
 
*[[The Greatest Honor]]
 
*[[Fifteen with Fiona]]
 
*[[The Nothingness in the Center of the Room]]
 
*[[One Last Test]]
 
*[[The Interview]]
 
*[[Stargazer]]
 
*[[Caterpillar|The Caterpillar series]]
 
 
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==Miscellaneous:==
 
 
 
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File:Ghost_Little_Girl.png| ''Second-place in Tiololo's [http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Rinskuro13/CREEPY_ART_CONTEST_WINNERS! Creepy Art Contest'']
 
 
File:Vngel_W.gif | Random GIF created in''' [http://www.piskelapp.com/ Piskel]'''
 
 
File:Insula_Aloe_pic.png| Aloe from [http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Insula ''Prelude: Insula'']
 
 
File:Vngel_2.png|Artwork for the sake of randomness
 
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Revision as of 02:44, October 3, 2018

It was a Tuesday, I can't remember the date but it was a few years ago now. I'd just got off work and I was stopping by the regular market. A quaint store just down the road from my place. I got all the necessities and was on my way to the counter when it caught my eye, a box of Fruit Loops. Glimmering under light from the white bulbs, at an absolute steal of a price. $2 dollars, for a 500g box, it was a miracle. A once in a lifetime deal, something humankind would ever see again. So I bought two boxes of God's cereal and headed for home.

I placed the boxes on the bench, looking over the receipt. I still couldn't believe how cheap they were. This thought stayed with me as I packed away the rest of my groceries and had dinner. I couldn't take my eyes off the boxes, they called to me, like some unattainable goal I would never reach. My mouth watered at the thought of ingesting their sugary goodness. I had a shower and went to bed, dreaming of tomorrow morning when I would be able to eat the loops.

A loud bump from downstairs woke me in the middle of the night. A solid but meaty thump, like flesh against wood... Except I had tile. I grabbed my 20 gauge and crept into the hall, the dark played tricks on my eyes, the shadows all casting the same fluttering shapes along the walls. I made my way down the stairs, beads of sweat forming on the back of my neck as I approached the floor.

I saw it standing there, a horribly deformed eldritch horror. It stood as tall as my ceiling, maybe taller as it hunched over my kitchen bench. It had no legs, a snake-like body clad in leathery white skin. His body forming into a neck and head, with a giant nose and clad in an aged bicycle helmet. A singular arm hoisted a box over its gaping mouth. My Fruit Loops and one box was already empty.

I watched on in horror as it finished my second box of loops and contorted it's horrific body to look at me. "Provide me with loops, brother." I gasped for air, it's oppressive gaze sapped the life from my legs, and the shotgun clattered to the ground. I couldn't move, I couldn't see, but I could think one thing alone. I had to acquire loops.

And so I write this tale, to tell you about the Long-Nosed Nobody. And if you see the Long-Nosed Nobody, do not fear, just provide him with LOOPS.

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