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Thank you! I actually made a few spin-offs to that pasta. But, I'm not sure if they're good enough to be on this wiki. So I never uploaded them here. You can read them if you want:
If you do read them, I'd like some feedback.
Thanks for the feedback! And your pasta was pretty decent. 7/10
This is a message from me to you. Good day to you sir, I read your short-story and liked it! Continue with the writing! :P
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I don't know that there's anything wrong with the way you have it laid out, but I did see some light things that need editing. The "Marked for Review" category doesn't mean your story is bad; just that a few small things need fixed. One example is your use of capital letters where they shouldn't be. The italics option is there when needed. Use it. Also, per the rules, a story cannot be labeled anything else if it has the M4R tag on it.
I'd fix some of the issues myself, but quite frankly, this story is very confusing. The way it is currently laid out is very jumpy. One example is the part in the beginning when we see the boy. He speaks, there's the radio announcement, then we find ourselves in bed. You should clarify things a bit better in this transition.
In the meantime, until the minor errors get cleaned up, it should stay in M4R.
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- Thanks for removing those categories, but, er, you might want to add Category:Blog posts again, or else it'll be swimming around with the uncategorised pages, and nobody can edit blog posts but admins. -WaveDivisionMultiplexer (Talk) (Contribs) 13:10, May 16, 2014 (UTC)
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