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A majority of the issues here were based around the awkward wording and plot (the story is told very passively, lacks description that explains events (like the climax of the story) that come off as being glossed over, etc.) which resulted in the story failing to meet our quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 14:21, November 14, 2019 (UTC)