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While it is an interesting premise that could be shaped into an engaging story, in its current form there are too many holes in the story that weaken it overall. Please feel free to message me if you want a copy of your story to take to the writer's workshop. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:12, January 6, 2019 (UTC)
Best of luck to you in your writing. Feel free to let me know if you need anything and I can give feedback or point you to a forum where you can receive feedback (the writer's workshop). Have a good one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 11:48, January 12, 2019 (UTC)