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EmpyrealInvective

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If you are here to inquiry about a story I deleted of yours, read this first as it will likely explain why. If you do not and post to this talk page and your story was deleted for obvious reasons covered in the blog, I will link the aforementioned guide to your talk page as an explanation.

Are you here about a Journal Entry pasta that I deleted? Read that guide before asking why I deleted your story.

If you are inquiring about a longer story that I deleted, perhaps this guide will elaborate on the issues a bit.

This guide on micro pastas should help if you are wondering why your short story was deleted.

Maybe it was an NSFW pasta, if so, this guide has you covered.

Feel free to leave a message and sign it with four tildes (~) Like this: ~~~~


Also note, keep messages civil. If you leave an acerbic message expect me to respond in kind.


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XenophobicMobian (talk) 19:59, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I have one more question, what's an extension hook and how do I remove it?

XenophobicMobian (talk) 21:56, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Just how do I remove the hooks?

Firebrand89

I understand that you removed my story. I would like to mention that some things in the story are spelled wrong on purpose. Specifically with a reference to Alice and Wonderland. "“Curiouser and curiouser!”

BraxTheDestroyer (talk) 23:55, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

BraxTheDestroyer

Paul Tremblay interview

So, now I got this guy to give me a straight up interview for the wiki.  We are e-mailing each other back and forth right now. Is there anything you want me to ask him on behalf of the community?  You know, Stephen King said his book A Headful of Ghosts "scared the hell" out of him. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 00:42, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

hey i got question

hey i wrote a story called bewithered and im bambo15 so i wanted to know why it was deleted. i fixed lots of errors and then made an appeal but i deleted it because it was bad. so i checked the deletion log to see who deleted it and it was you. it said it didnt meet up to the quility standards. i read the minimum requriments page(sorry about my spelling here i need a spell check) but dont see anything wrong there. i need help from the person that deleted it. i will post on the writers board thing. so if you could reply and sorry about the mispelled things on the message(there is no spell check on here.)

          Thank you!


AMMO MORE AMMO (talk) 15:24, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hey

In a title, do you captilize "is?" 

"In a war, it didn't matter how many lives I ended. It mattered how many of them I saved." 21:47, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Addressed. SoPretentious 22:01, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

What's up with the PotM voting page?

I'm not seeing any stories.  Is it just me?  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:19, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

                     I am alway amazed at your speed.  Thank you. I am done with that interview, by the way; he was a hell of a nice guy.  Give me a few days to edit it up all nice.  Sound good, good buddy?    HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:24, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

                                       Awesome, I voted.  Small issues with my formatting?  I don't think so.  Ha ha.  He did include one hyperlink to an essay he wrote on horror and American pop culture (it's fucking awesome by the way) and you know if there is a way to fuck it up I will.   Yeah, I'd also love a proofread.  HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 01:46, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Chloe

Hi, you deleted my story (here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Chloe )

Is there a way to get it back? I'd like to read it again and maybe to work on it but it doesn't work with google cache

Mortaest (talk) 15:35, September 15, 2015 (UTC)Mortaest

Taken care of. « UnderScorre » 15:38, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

I understand that you deleted my pasta. I am not very mad, just slightly upset and I would like you to give me some tips for more uploads. Chemical Cats (talk) 21:08, September 15, 2015 (UTC)


I wanted to reply on the deletion appeal page, but there is no way to do it (story: a day off)

-the shortness: what's wrong? You said there is no problem with short stories, you even gave an example of a shorter one

-the punctuation: it can be corrected, and easily because it's a short story

-wording: it can also be easily corrected. I'm not a native speaker, so excuse me if sometimes I don't use the correct word

-story issues: I haven't read these stories before. After reading them, yes there are few similarities but they are all different. You shouldn't delete a story because there is already one with a scarecrow. I read it and it's pretty much the only common point

So, will you help me to improve my story so we could post a proper version of it?

Mortaest (talk) 21:13, September 15, 2015 (UTC)Mortaest

That's false: my story does not have the exact same premise as any other.

I wasn't speaking about the statue, I was speaking about "Mother's call", which is less detailed, doesn't have any "hint" (the straw), and doesn't have this "flashback of the hint" (which I read in a Stephen King's novel)

How do you want me to correct my story if I don't know what's wrong with it?

Writer's workshop? I've never heard of it. This site is a mess and it's a shame: I bet loads of other good stories are deleted just because of some punctuation mistakes (which are not easy to spot when you aren't a native speaker) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mortaest (talkcontribs).


I meant that I've never heard about it before getting my story deleted, if I knew it was there, of course, I would have posted it there before submitting

You pointed out the shortness and the rushness of my story, I pointed out "Mother's call" which is way more shorter and rushed.

Sorry for not having a perfect English. Have I mentionned I'm not a native speaker yet? Who said I don't want to learn? How do you want me to improve anything if you don't want to let me correct my mistakes? It's just some puntuation mistakes and one bad use of a word. So if I understand it well, I have no right to correct my story, I should just let it go because of some mistakes I could easily correct? That's not very encouraging...

No intention of improving my writing skills? Why do you think I post these stories? Why do you think I asked which were my mistakes? Why do you think I asked to correct my story?

Mortaest (talk) 22:17, September 15, 2015 (UTC)Mortaest

umm my story called yuki bloodborn was deleted i really don't understand because i used proper grammer and punchuation but it sadly got deleted the story i had used and i just want my story to be readYukishy1523 (talk) 22:41, September 15, 2015 (UTC)yukishy1523Yukishy1523 (talk) 22:41, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

You deleted my pasta. I read the quality standard thing and i honestly dont see anything wrong with it other than a few misspelled words and missed commas. Not to be mean but i have seen other pastas with worse quality than mine and more problems than mine so before deleting a story that has nothing wrong with it other than a few errors you need to take a look at some of the crap that didnt get deleted that should have. If you saw something wrong with my pasta, thats not my fault. The only reason I can think of that you would delete it is that you have something against the topic of it. So you can take your "quality standards" and shove them up your bottom because i will no longer be using this site in any way for any reason. I did my best and you obviously dont know quality. Screw you, this webbsite, and its users.

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