Gomez Capulet

aka Erasmus Bloodhaven

  • I live in Gallifrey
  • I was born on July 11
  • My occupation is burnout
  • I am Capitalist swine


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Underscorre (talk) 11:52, April 15, 2015 (UTC)


Hey, please don't remove the M4R template from stories. Only admins are permitted to remove it. If it happens again, I will have to block you.

« UnderScorre » 12:52, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Troll Pasta

A page you recently created was deleted because it was a Troll Pasta. We no longer accept Troll Pastas or Horrible Troll Pastas, they are now considered spam pages. If you want to post them anywhere, please post them on {{#NewWindowLink:w:c:trollpasta|Trollpasta Wiki}} and not here. You are now banned for 3 days for not contributing quality work for the wiki.

« UnderScorre » 15:06, April 15, 2015 (UTC)


Ok, as long as it doesn't happen again, I don't mind all that much.

To be fair, it wasn't a bad piece of writing, it was just totally innapropriate for this wiki.

« UnderScorre » 08:16, April 19, 2015 (UTC)


You can use this template: {{By-user|Nosaelg}} to attribute your stories. I fixed the latest one as what you put is not a template on this wiki. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:08, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

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« UnderScorre » 21:26, July 1, 2015 (UTC)


Hey Nosaelg,

Here is a copy of your pasta. Best of luck revising it.

« UnderScorre » 21:42, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

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EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:15, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

RE: Your Story

The big issue wasn't that you wanted to give some mystery. That's fine and dandy. But the execution of the mystery was bad. You left the reader confused and the storytelling was awkward, at best. Whereas the story had some kind of good potential, that was put me in particular on the fence. But the bad stuff needs gotten rid. You need to make it somewhat clear what you're talking about. You can have mystery, but we need an idea. Mystery shouldn't confuse us. It should make us question things without leaving the important questions unanswered.

Was it a drug? Is the guy in prison or something? Is he insane? Was it what you were talking about - some kind of healing life juice with deadly side-effects? These questions need answered. You focused entirely on that needle, so it's necessary that we get some information about it. Senjumaru Shutara 02:25, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

There's a difference between being vague and making an anemic story. There was little to no plot, the protagonist contradicts himself (and the contradictions really have no bearing on the plot.), and what little information the audience is given has no real bearing on the story. ("Why do I feel like I'm throwing my life away for a few seconds of pain?", "Why did I say cancer?", "My father was as good as they come." All of these details are meant to enhance the story, but with nothing to apply them to, they come off as extraneous.)

The cyclical ending seems tacked on and there's no real sense of terror here. I'm sorry but there's not enough here for the story to be up to quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:26, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

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