Heavens' Onigiri

aka ....

  • I live in .....
  • I was born on September 22
  • My occupation is To study and critique Literature
  • I am Female


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ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 04:59, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Welcome Heaven!

I heard you're new, so welcome to the wiki! I'm a well known nobody, so if you need any help, please let me know. Also happy early birthday! Luigifan100 (talk) 21:25, September 19, 2014 (UTC)


Well I'm not running for admin, but thanks for the support anyway.  As far as your writing goes, we all go through periods of time where our creativity struggles or is blocked altogether.  Just don't let it get to you, it's normal.  As I said, I can see some talent in your descriptive work, you just need to make sure you have a solid plot, and that you use your descriptions as you go.  Don't go describing everything in the scene all at once, build the scene as you go along.  Using dialogue, when you can, always helps.  You also need to do more proofreading, and do some reading out-loud, as I stated in my other comment.

I think you may need to do some more reading of other stories to get a better feel for what your stories need.  This could also help you move past your point of struggle and possibly get inspiration.  Don't try to mimic other authors, but reading their work can give you a better idea of what to do and what to avoid. I would suggest reading some of GreyOwl's stories. A lot of them aren't that long, but she does a great job at using the right amount of description and character development. There are other great authors I could recommend, but a lot of their works are longer, and I'm unaware of your attention span. I will try to keep an eye out for when you post anything, so I can give any advice I may have. Anyway, I hope this helps, and I wish you luck in the future.

Jay Ten (talk) 16:57, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

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