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HeresJosh

aka Milk

  • I live in Poland
  • I was born on March 2
  • I am Male

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ClericofMadness (talk) 21:42, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

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Additionally the story itself was not up to quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:44, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Story

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EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:59, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Story

You have reuploaded a story that was previously deleted without going through the proper channels to approve its return. As you have been previously warned for this, you have had your ability to edit suspended for 1 day. Further attempts to reupload previously deleted stories will result in lengthier blocks from editing.



EmpyrealInvective (talk) 22:01, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Story deletion

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There were numerous punctuation, capitalization, wording, grammatical, and story issues that resulted in your post not meeting our quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 23:57, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

After reading your story, I noticed a massive amount of capitalization ("I persuaded myself that the scarecrow was trying to hurt grandma (Grandma, as you're using it as a title).", "my family traveled back to Poland for the Summer (summer).", "The baba yaga.", etc.), punctuation ("I was visiting my grandmother(')s house, a two story bright blue cottage on the end of a street.") grammar (it's= it is, its=possession. "The music pounded it's way through every street", "It's eyes always memorized me.", "it's eyes narrowed down on me. It's smile grew wider", "I was terrified of the damn thing for most of my childhood their.", etc.), wording ("At first I was little edgy", "There were teens hanging around the remains of demolished houses and vaping, some strange carvings on a nearby tree.", "Bubak once again rose, letting out a fierce screech a leaping towards grandpa.", etc.), and plot issues (the story is rushed, has numerous issues, and the ending feels generic and cliche).
Please note that this is not a complete list of issues. These were the things I noticed after five minutes of review (the time it took to read your story and determine that it failed to meet this wiki's quality standards and delete it) when the story was posted. I would strongly suggest using the writer's workshop for your next story as this is quite a lot to overlook. It's also worth noting that all of these issues were present in your previous stories as well so I would strongly suggest getting feedback on your work and heavily revising it before posting it to the wiki. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:34, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Final Warning

As you are approaching your fifth ban for re-uploading pages, I figured I'd give you one last warning. If you re-post another page, you will be given an indefinite ban as per our site rules. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:48, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

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