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Hi HouzeMan, I saw your comment on Journey to nowhere and thought I'd respond here, since if it is deleted you won't be able to see my comment.
I tagged your pasta to deletion because it seemed unfinished to me. We do not allow unfinished pages here, see our rules on unfinished pages. You mentioned in your note at the top that it's just the first part of this work, and the ending doesn't seem to be a conclusion to the story.
If it's not unfinished, let me know, and I can give you a more solid critique. I'd also recommend taking your story to the writer's workshop before posting, as your story has a few technical issues which need to be resolved, and the workshop can really help to ensure your story meets the site's standards.
Best of luck with your story!
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