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That is a good point. You don't want a situation like this [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x07BKBdjIak] or this [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XX1QgD-Jy18]. As for cooking them, I'd say they'd need to be washed well and cooked well, just like chicken. I just realized something. If that guy would prefer to be eating barbecued iguana, then maybe he has a terrible memory of Tijuana too (He'd rather be eating barbecued iguana than whatever he was experiencing). By the way, that Art of Noise video was number 36 on Vh1's Top 80 [Music Videos] of the 80s countdown between "Born in the USA" by Bruce Springsteen and "Straight Up" by Paula Abdul. Thanks, I hope all is well too. [[User:Raidra|Raidra]] ([[User talk:Raidra|talk]]) 00:38, October 28, 2016 (UTC)
 
That is a good point. You don't want a situation like this [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x07BKBdjIak] or this [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XX1QgD-Jy18]. As for cooking them, I'd say they'd need to be washed well and cooked well, just like chicken. I just realized something. If that guy would prefer to be eating barbecued iguana, then maybe he has a terrible memory of Tijuana too (He'd rather be eating barbecued iguana than whatever he was experiencing). By the way, that Art of Noise video was number 36 on Vh1's Top 80 [Music Videos] of the 80s countdown between "Born in the USA" by Bruce Springsteen and "Straight Up" by Paula Abdul. Thanks, I hope all is well too. [[User:Raidra|Raidra]] ([[User talk:Raidra|talk]]) 00:38, October 28, 2016 (UTC)
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what are u talking about i am not roleplaying i am telling the truth i do not lie i only right what i feel and what i think is interasting and u are saying i am roleplaying and if i keep "roleplaying" u will bloke me and i am boing nothing rong so plz stop saying i am roleplaying i dont mean to be mean but i hate when people say i am doing something i am not doing it just makes me mad so plz stop saying i am doing something i am not :- / 
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<p style="text-align:right;">your friend . Ricki the vampire </p>

Revision as of 13:40, October 28, 2016

NOTICE: If you're here to contest a deletion, please read this blog first. If you want to attempt getting your story back on the site, put it in the Writer's Workshop, make significant changes based on the feedback, and then make a Deletion Appeal including a link to the workshop thread.


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Emp lowers the property value of your talk page!

Sorry about the Deletion Appeal thing. I marked their story for deletion and once I saw their message on the appeal I figured that I had to let them know that their story had numerous issues that they overlooked. Feel free to take it down or leave it. Either way, I got to sully your unspoiled talk page with my message. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:20, October 13, 2016 (UTC)

Everyone knows that the Emp-movement is spreading (also coincidentally, and in no way connected, so is syphilis). I figured since I marked it for deletion and still had the page open on a separate tab that I may as well take advantage of that. Have a good one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:31, October 13, 2016 (UTC)

Snitchin'

I believe this page has a couple categories that don't exist- http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Working_As_A_Face_Character_At_Disney_World Raidra (talk) 00:14, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Addressed. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:24, October 14, 2016 (UTC)
~exits hiding spot and gives "I got your back" finger point~ I was originally going to post, "~waves hand in air~ Teacher! Someone added categories they weren't supposed to!" but then my doubt kicked in and for a second I wondered, "What if these really are new categories?" Sometimes I have self-doubt that kicks in at odd times. Or do I? Maybe I'm wrong. I dunno. I do know that if you want a bad "Snitches Get Stitches" video, Tyler the Creator made a Mountain Dew commercial that went horribly wrong. Things are going well here. Thanks, and I hope you have a good one too. Raidra (talk) 01:58, October 14, 2016 (UTC)
No problem about the internet connectivity on your front, welcome to the world of third world country infrastructure! It's... something. I'll try to resolve any issues I can that I notice when I'm around. That being said, just message me if you feel I'm overstepping any boundaries as I'm not an admin anymore and shouldn't be afforded those rights without community support although I still want to help when I can. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:00, October 14, 2016 (UTC)
I remember what that can be like. I recall a time I was trying to submit a request for ECPA funding and the internet bottomed out at a cyber. I had to go to a fachenta cafe and buy like five things (so they didn't kick me out) while I re-typed the report and sent it out. As for me and my post-admin ways, I'm just laying that option for the future if I overstep my bounds as I know each staff member likes to handle things in their own way and I don't want to step on any toes (especially because I know you can be quite the bastardus when someone crosses you). I want to contribute (while still organizing my life), but I don't want it to become a hassle/or lead to more work for our current roster of admins/crats. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:18, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Fifty Foot Ant

Would you change this on the below story? [societies → society's] (CTRL+F to search for words)

50 Foot Ant's Fifth Story

TenebrousTorrent (talk) 02:31, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Mickey's Best Friend

There's comments that need to be deleted on this story because they claim the story is real. The top three and there may be more, I'm not sure. [a undisclosed → an undisclosed] Mickey's Best Friend

TenebrousTorrent (talk) 07:44, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Story Deletion.

I dont understand why my story called DreamsarentDreams was deleted. I am sorry for bothering but why?

Sleepy999 (talk)SleepyRicky1999

I still don't understand why my story is unoriginal I've been reading pastas for 6 years and never came across a pasta like the one I wrote. It may not be the best or good as others but how is it unoriginal? 

Sleepy999 (talk) 17:19, October 14, 2016 (UTC)SleepyRicky1999

And if its unoriginal link me one pasta that is similar and I would shut my mouth.

Sleepy999 (talk) 17:24, October 14, 2016 (UTC)SleepyRicky1999

Fine. But can you give me back my story to copy and paste onto the thingy. Please. I'm sorry but I was a bit confuzzled.

Sleepy999 (talk) 17:47, October 14, 2016 (UTC)SleepyRicky1999

thx

Hi there, I am here because my story got deleted (it's called the house of fools), I am a first time writer (for serious pastas anyway) and I would like to know why my story was bad so that I van improve as a writer.

Hey, I saw you deleted my Creepypasta, The Tiny Table. Now, it said it was deleted because it violated a Quailty standard. Can you tell me what standard it violated and other things wrong with it so I can fix it and become a better writter?

Hey Jay ten, I see you deleted my creepypasta, The Tiny Door. You said that it was deleted because it violated a quality standard. Can you tell me what standard I violated and anything else wrong with my pasta so I can fix it and become a better writer?

AwesomeGodinez (talk) 19:43, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Hey man I have a new story up in the writer's workshop. I went throught this one mutiple times before posting it, si there shouldn't be many errors. 


Tide16 (talk)

Re: Edits

Thanks for pointing those out (and for correcting the typos). I made some changes to improve the flow and fix some of the clunkier wording. Keep up the good work Bastardus. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:42, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Deletion FAQ

Would you edit this page so it doesn't mention VCROC? Creepypasta Wiki:Deletion FAQ

TenebrousTorrent 20:49, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

I am sick of you deleting every single thing I even attempt to do here. I get it for the first one but the latest one was something I put time and effort into. If you were just going to go after everything I do you should just let me know so I should quit. At least I saved my story and can put it somewhere else and you can't stop me because if you don't on the Internet. I mean seriously please give me an hour to feel just a tiny bit pleased before you declare it a troll thing. I get it trolls are annoying but I was just trying to post one story that was much less awful than my first. I am so done with this place. Congratulations for being so instantaneous with your judgments.

Hey the name may be generic, btu im basing off of an actual name we had for an actual abandoned house we lived in in a kid.  I don't know how else I could change it to  make more life to it? I mean I thought you coulnd't delet stories on wheterh you like them or not. I don't like the Godfather but I wouldn't say it's not a bad movie. If you stop reading after one boring paragraph, you need some pateince. That's something I know a lot, seeing as how I spend hours working on stories and you love to dlete them because of two awkward sentences. 


Tide16 (talk)

Well I don't know what's wrong with the rest so what? you want me to just delete the first paragraph? Skip the introductions to the characters and jump right in like I did with the last story I wrote. And you have to put yourself in my shoes, If you care about something you are going to feel for i. I'll edit the first page, but I have other stories I plan on wirting and it will take a long time if we go one page at a time



Tide16 (talk)

Re:

Hey, thanks for taking the time out to do those edits. I had a look at them and they all seem right to me. As for British/US practices towards the end I think it's just a mistake I made. Looking at that sentence specifically I think I cut it down from three adjectives to two and left the extra comma in without thinking! Either way thanks for giving it a lookover - I'd appreciate hearing what you thought of it though feel free to take your time ChristianWallis (talk) 08:30, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

I want to know why my Creepypasta story got deleted. My grammer wasn't that bad, and it isn't a rip off Jeff the killer. It was more orginal and different, but I want to know! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Anonymous.p24 (talkcontribs).

Semi-responded. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:35, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Can't Complain!

Yeah! Everything's fine. I haven't been active for the past few days due to a nasty computer virus. Last I checked I can't post comments, but I'm going to try again soon. Thanks so much for your compliments, Jay, to hear that from a writer that I look up to is very flattering to say the very least. 

SnakeTongue (Nelson Smith) (talk) 21:28, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Yo yo

Ha, not a problem. Things are okay for me, thanks for asking. I've taken a short break from wiki stuff due to rl issues/computer problems/college/a job application/a general wave of despondency. Pretty cliché stuff. I expect to get back into the proverbial "wiki groove" soon. I've been working on my collab piece in the meantime, and I'm past the halfway point with that and will rush to get it on the WW. And also it looks like the Recent activity page now has an auto-refresher, so that's refreshing to see.

And finally on an interesting note, I'll actually be attending a screening of Rocky Horror (my first time) very soon, and Barry Bostwick (aka Brad Majors) will be present, so that will definitely be blog post material.

"Girls will run around in your head, till you wished you liked boys instead!" 08:00, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

The Recent Activity refreshes by itself now? Damn it, I was starting to get used to the thingy you showed Christian.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 12:15, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Listen dude, i'm sorry Jay, I was just really stresed that day. I get what your saying, but The Black Fox (At leats in my opinion was shorter and better then The Lake. You don't like the beginning of the latest one, i'll change it. I think we all need to jusgt chill out. The world isn't ending, I'll add my new prolouge, but i'll ask other mods o view it, because you will more likely still be angry at me, and I get it, you get annoyed wiht my stories and asking for your help but I thought you were awesome and you helped me with a lot of grammer, I thought we would have a relationship grow into a friendship over time, sorry. 


Tide16 (talk)


Colon Problems

It seems I've been having some colon problems and it has been giving me a pain in the arse. Wait! Before your sick mind perceives this message incorrectly, I was talking about my colon in writing. To be more exact, in my story Please Be Careful. I noticed you made a few edits.

Thankyou for that, but as an amateur writer I still have trouble figuring out what colon needs to be used in what situation. I was hoping you could brief me on this, and give me some examples if you had the time.

Also, I found this - http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:556924#6. It's been up for a while and I was under the impression it was against the Site Rules. Just thought you may want to check it out.

Everyone is a monster to someone. 03:44, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

In the library today

I was at my local library today, and while I was purveying the music section I saw an album (I think it was a soundtrack) called Famous for Killing Each Other: Music from and Inspired by Hatfields and McCoys. I didn't check it out, but I thought you might be interested to know that this is something that exists. Raidra (talk) 04:17, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

re: check in

Heyo! I am still perfectly fine myself, thanks for asking. Just been occupied at work for the most part (though the company isn't doing to hot right now), and other little things when I'm at home.

I keep trying to finish Boring Johnny but not having a lot of success at the moment. It's there, bubbling in me head, but won't come out. ><

Speaking off, when's the deadline again?

Nachtrae (talk) 06:46, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Epic Battles of Ohio!

We've been to Ohio's Amish country a couple of times. There was a great chocolate shop and a restaurant with the best chicken tenders I've ever eaten, so I'm glad they won the battle. The best parts of that were Quagmire's lines ("What again was the nature of your beef with them?" and "Ulp, now it's an AIDS quilt!") and the Amish rebuilding the barn and then standing by like nothing had happened.

Here's something less awesome- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ohio_Cup. It's fine if you don't actually read the article because I sure didn't care enough to read it, and I'm a Reds fan. Hal McCoy, the great Cincinnati Reds beat reporter for the Dayton Daily News, once called it a meaningless contest played to win a trophy so ugly that you couldn't pay the players to look at it if you put it in front of the dugouts. Ouch! Raidra (talk) 00:34, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

"So, what'd you do while you were in Cincinnati?"
"Well, I went to a Reds game."
"Ah, the first professional baseball team, seeped in history and tradition! How was it?"
"They had an ugly trophy."
On a related note, my Mom had a co-worker who told her he went to a Reds game and counted the stadium lights while he was there. Raidra (talk) 23:50, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

hey can i ask why you delet my story and give me the critisism so i can make it better :)? —Preceding unsigned comment added by IndiraMind‎ (talkcontribs).

I got this one. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 01:16, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re: NP

No prob. figured I should earn my keep around here when I can. When you're done reading Chris' story, mind checking out mine? (As it's a longer story, there's no rush, but there are likely errors I've overlooked.) EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:01, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

My johns always tell me to start with 'just the tip'. Jokes aside, It's a longer story so take your time and don't rush. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:19, October 21, 2016 (UTC)
You do not know how tempted I was to grab some google images of Trypophobia to sprinkle throughout the story. I'll look back at the wording and see what I can do. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:12, October 21, 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for catching those issues, I fixed 'em up. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 17:22, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for keeping up the focus and finding those issues. Just an update, I issued a warning to a user for adding a non-existent category. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 19:13, October 23, 2016 (UTC)
I'll get on those edits once I finish getting something to eat. As for the sections that aren't visible, do you think I should add a little extra space to the format to imply that Tryps isn't only affecting the living now and that there is something missing from the body of the story? I didn't want to make it too noticeable, but I'm also worried it might not get noticed at all if left the way it is. I just wanted to wrap this up by saying who appreciative I am that you took the time to read through the story and catch the issues I overlooked. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:29, October 25, 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the idea, I tried to start small and eat up larger sections as I went. I'm a bit worried about intentionally removing words as it may impact people reading it unawares. First review: "a story where the plot holes are a theme... Probably." EmpyrealInvective (talk) 22:00, October 25, 2016 (UTC)
"Seriously, those stuck together pages were the only times I really found a cohesive plot in this story." EmpyrealInvective (talk) 22:19, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

Slack

Jay, can you get on Slack for a moment? There is an invitation waiting for you. Don't get excited though, it's not an invitation to my annual wear-a-laptop-for-a-hat orgy. It's for a boring admin thing, pfff. MrDupin (talk) 16:32, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

Close (To The Edit)

I just wanted to drop you a line and say I appreciate you editing that one post on Empy's costume contest thread. Raidra (talk) 01:57, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they did either. It's cool. FLAAA-VORRR FLAVVVV!!! Your mention of iguanas made me think that you could be a Tijuanan barbecuer (approximately 2:03-2:10 of this music video [1]). There's always this guy too- http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Dart_Tongue.jpg. Then again, if you wanted to be a surreal, destructive performance artist/musician, you could watch this video for inspiration [2]. Attack at my whim, my musical instrument-destroying minions! Raidra (talk) 15:31, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Free hu-Wait, where did the clown run?

Haha, thank you dude. I honestly didn't expect anyone to notice. Also, don't worry. I will be in an alcoholic coma before the dark.

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 13:04, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm writing another creepypasta and I'm putting a lot more effort into this one than my others and I wanted to give you a sample of what I've got so far btw I'm just a kid who thinks he has a future in writing. ( story sample here)Ok so this may seem strange but I was taking a stroll through the woods and I found an old tent. I immediately assumed that it was a hobo camp, not unusual I find them all the time. I made the conclusion that I was going to cut it open and see what was inside. Once it was open I started going through all of the things inside. I found food items, chips,hot dogs,soda,etc. I even found a new pocket knife, which was nice since mine was old and on the brink of breaking. As I kept digging I found an old camera. I thought to myself "there's no way this is a hobo camp". The battery was dead (of course) I looked at the charging port and I knew that I had one that would fit. I took it back to my truck and then took it home. It took all night to charge, but when it finally did I plugged it into my computer and found the footage. I played it and this is what I found. (Video starts here) Baby come over here I got the camera working. Oh good now we can document our adventures. Please don't go crazy with it I'm not going to have a camera stuck in my face 24/7. Ok ok I will only video when something interesting happens. Thank you. Ok so we are exactly 2 days into our one week stay in the woods.

Discord

Hey Jay, can you get a bit on Discord? We're working on some top secret stuff. MrDupin (talk) 18:44, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Wadey15 (talk) 01:34, October 27, 2016 (UTC) jay, I've been thinking about this for a while and to be honest, maybe I'm not cut out to be a writer, all my stories end up being terrible. And another thing I feel like you and Christian are the only people I can call friends on here at the moment. Everyone else just makes feel upset, maybe I should just give up on making pastas, unless of course I can make my writing better but autism gets in the way there, not understanding stuff like full stops, and punctuation, and I suck at grammar. So much for becoming the next SlimeBeast or cosbydaf. To be honest those two are better at pastas than me. Well see you soon 😭

RE:

Don't worry about it man, it's all good. Take all the time you need. I'll make sure the wiki doesn't catch fire or get blown into space. I promise.

Have a good one too buddy. MrDupin (talk) 20:06, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'll make sure the wiki doesn't catch fire...

Ooh, not even a little, tiny bit?

You bring the bodies, I handle the rest (talk) 20:14, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

Iguana love

That is a good point. You don't want a situation like this [3] or this [4]. As for cooking them, I'd say they'd need to be washed well and cooked well, just like chicken. I just realized something. If that guy would prefer to be eating barbecued iguana, then maybe he has a terrible memory of Tijuana too (He'd rather be eating barbecued iguana than whatever he was experiencing). By the way, that Art of Noise video was number 36 on Vh1's Top 80 [Music Videos] of the 80s countdown between "Born in the USA" by Bruce Springsteen and "Straight Up" by Paula Abdul. Thanks, I hope all is well too. Raidra (talk) 00:38, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

what are u talking about i am not roleplaying i am telling the truth i do not lie i only right what i feel and what i think is interasting and u are saying i am roleplaying and if i keep "roleplaying" u will bloke me and i am boing nothing rong so plz stop saying i am roleplaying i dont mean to be mean but i hate when people say i am doing something i am not doing it just makes me mad so plz stop saying i am doing something i am not :- / 

thank you and have a good day 

your friend . Ricki the vampire 

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