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To answer your question:
Your story was riddled with grammar errors, typos, faulty punctuation, and overall bad formatting. I wasn't allowed to change it too much and I couldn't let it stay because it wasn't up to QS (as already explained in deletion message).
You may not reupload it, but you may rework it and then post it in Writer's Workshop to get some feedback from the community, who will then decide is the story is wiki-worthy or not.