In Torment Series
Hello, Durpin. I'm sorry to bother you, but I was wondering if you could take a look at the sequel to In Torment in the Writer's Workshop? It's fairly large, but even some insight on a single paragraph would help a great deal.
RE: Marked for Review
Re: Confusion (?)
M4R and Delete Now
Hey, sorry about that. Duely noted! It's been a good while since I've last been on this site. I should've made myself familiar with any changes here.
Thank you -13:59, June 3, 2015 (UTC)
(the HTML entity code for a non-breaking space) at the beginning of a line. So, typing this (I've used two characters for effect, as it's pretty difficult to see):
Would output this:
Hope that helps.
- De nada, amigo. « UnderScorre » 21:53, June 5, 2015 (UTC)
- With regards to adding stuff, yeah, that's how you do it, although it is advisable to post it to a blog first then ask an admin if you can move it to WA, though I'm sure anything you write will be more than good enough.
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:468518#4 aka writers workshop story. I spent the time to go to spellcheck.net at grammar check. I think the plot is solid, and the ending scare factor is good. Pretty original. What do you believe?
Another Review Request
I saw that you were a moderator so I'masking if you can assist me. "Welcome to Funland" is my first creepypasta and I would appreciate if you could give me your opinion on it. Thank you! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Weerd101 (talk • contribs).
Re: Writing advice
The page has been protected because while you were given permission to write a blog, it really needs to be reviewed and okayed by an admin first before it is put up. As was the case with one writer's advice section that was more insulting than helpful. The page was originally protected but the protection expired so I just re-protected it. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:37, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
Review Request No.2
- My story Not Me was deleted. I don't know the reason for this so i posted it on The Writers Workshop. If you could help me and still review it that would be much appreciated. Thank you! Weerd101 (talk) 22:18, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
Re: Writing Advice Blog
Thanks. I can add it right now.
Either you don't care or know, but I nominated your pasta "In the Woods" for PoTM. Apparently I'm not really important to your way of life, but I thought it was pretty creepy and humorous after you explained it. So...I guess good luck for it. Just though about mentioning it to you.
Classical Retard ==> Dammit, you're cold. 18:41, June 9, 2015 (UTC)
I thank you for this, I finally made a story worth reading, and it's not even deleted, now I just need people to see it is all. anyways you made my day. LordMReaper (talk) 13:18, June 10, 2015 (UTC)LordMReaper
P.S. I am thaking you because you were the first admin to see it
Re: you forgotten me ??
Could you update me on how the reviews on my 'Human Experiment Chamber' series pastas are going? I know you're busy with exams (mine are just over now), so I'd like to know when the reviews are going to be up. If you can't fit it into your schedule, I wouldn't mind, I'd just like to be informed, as I am very much looking forward to your feedback!
Thanks so much
Thank you, you are amazing.
Thank you very much for your informative feedback.
I'm not quite sure how I should've handled Syton's death; should I have switched to third person??
Looking forward to your next reviews!
In Torment In Hell
Hey, Durpin. I know you're busy, but I came here to clarify. I recently asked you to review In Torment In Hell in the writers workshop. You are busy, and have a clustered schedule, I know, but I came to tell you- if you do get around to it, the story has actually released. In Torment In Hell. This would be the version I would need help on the most. Thank you for reading, even if you don't get around to the story at all. ShawnHowellsCP (talk) 16:21, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
This is NOT a contest part 2 The Dupin files
Did you catch my blog? I hope it's not too NSFW. Do you like the persona I gave you? I know it's nothing like Poe's Dupin but I tried to make it my own. You should add to it. I'd like to see where you take your own alter-ego. HumboldtLycanthrope (talk) 16:10, June 17, 2015 (UTC)
RE: Comic or horror
Wherever you want to take it. That's the beauty of these kinds of things. Good luck with your exams.
I saw you have exams. I'm sure I've said it to you before, but it never hurts to say it again: "Best of luck!" Try not to stress yourself out over them and know that you've got people rooting for you :) Buckle up! I'm going to be popular! 05:47, June 18, 2015 (UTC)
I've deleted What Lurks within the Darkness?, kept Never Played It, since I feel it (just barely) scrapes through QS, and fixed the formatting in both it and Heartbeat. Thanks for pointing those out. « UnderScorre » 11:20, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
New Tobit Chapter
New Tobit story is out, please check it out at Tobit: Hiya Toby and the Unwashed.
Hello! You have very recently said on my new pasta that if my pasta meets QS I need to change my title. As a rollbacker I believe that you have that happy privilege of name changing. If possible, could you please contact me if you can change the title of said pasta? Thanks.