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You have been reuploading you story without fixing it to meet the QS. You will be blocked one day from editing. In the future, please dont reupload stories without making them meet the QS of the wiki. Nommehzombies (talk) 01:58, November 1, 2014 (UTC)
Your story was deleted as it didn't meet the quality standards of the site. It is one massive paragraph which makes it harder to read. Dialogue isn't spaced correctly. You overuse ellipses (and do so incorrectly.) Ellipses are reserved for pauses in dialogue or omission of words from a quote. 5+ times in a paragraph is excessive and weakens the plot. Distorted speech (alternating caps) have been listed as a Cliche.
Additionally you are missing commas from sentences that need a pause in flow. Try reading your story aloud to identify the issue. Additionally there are wording issues. "Before she left(,) he manage(managed) to say with his last final breathes (breath)"
Then there's the ending. ""Then she left out the back door(comma missing) not leaving a mark of her existence(period missing)" Except for the boy she murdered and his decapitated sister. That's actually quite a bit of evidence to leave behind of one's existence. I would really suggest taking your next story to the writer's workshop for feedback/assistance so your story doesn't get deleted for quality issues. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 02:26, November 5, 2014 (UTC)