(Probably) Why Your Story Was Deleted
You story is far below this site's quality standards. The reasons for this are both grammar and mechanical errors, and a generic and cliched story and character. It doesn't make much sense- why on earth was your protagonist not doing anything about the monster in his own house? Why didn't he call the police or something, or just try to run away? And what in the world was the 'monster' even supposed to be?
In short, I didn't understand much of what was going on, but what I did was overused and rathe r uninteresting. It was something I had to force myself to read, which is never a good thing. You need to practice writing a bit more before you submit another pasta, so make fullest use of the writing advice available on this wiki.
FUCK THIS, FUCK CREEPYPASTAS, AND FUCK MY LIFE, ANYTHING I FUCKING DO IT HAS TO GET RUINNED BY ASSHOLES OR ADMINS, SO FUCK THIS AND CREEPYPASTA CAN SUCK MY DICK —Preceding unsigned comment added by RocketPoptarts (talk • contribs).