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TheGuyBehindYou

aka Daniel Bainbridge

  • I live in A coffee can under a bridge
  • My occupation is Existing
  • I am male

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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Sloshedtrain (Talk) 03:54, November 10, 2012

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MooseJuice (talk) 18:57, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nah, taking orders from butthurt whiners like you isn't my style. Cry some more. Christ... I WAS FROZEN TODAY!! 03:28, November 18, 2012 (UTC)


{{Template:RALO}} Sloshedtrain (talk) (contribs) 04:17, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded story

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Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring

15:49, January 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reason for Deletion Appeal Denial

Hello,

I'm sorry to inform you that you deletion appeal has been denied. It's very poorly and awkwardly written and the story isn't told well. Sentences like "It's also a camping ground, because if it wasn't, they wouldn't be camping there." are unnecessary and ones like "They each turned towards each other and kissed, but when they looked back at the fire, there was a red object in the bright orange flames." are so stilted it makes it impossible to build any kind of mood or tension.

And there is no mood or tension. You fly through everything. YOu give us two sentences about supposedly frightening things, the fire thing is not only not particularly creepy, but it also never comes into play, and then the couple are ready to go home.

The story is, honestly, nonsensical, even with you trying to explain it in your deletion appeal. There's a Civil War soldier. . .but it's not a ghost? What? He can't be a ghost, because you tell us and the boyfriend murders him, but still. . .it's a Civil War soldier. And the boyfriend is supposed to have murdered the family, but there is literally no clues to that. The tent being opened and closed isn't a clue, because you describe it as opening and closing quickly over and over again. That makes me think it's happening more than twice and in quick succession. Also, why would the boyfriend need to leave the car when they were getting ready to go?

ImGonnaBeThatGuy (talk) 16:40, February 17, 2014 (UTC)

BloodyNightmare666 (talk) 22:02, February 28, 2015 (UTC)Can you help me with something, please? I have problems with publishing my pastas22:02, February 28, 2015 (UTC)BloodyNightmare666 (talk)

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