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It's tough shifting its tone to be more like a creepy pasta from the cautionary tale it is currently. You don't have to have George go mad with power. I guess you could add onto the sections where George tries to improve the world and how the people respond (negatively and their reasons behind it.). You can also build up George's relationship with his friends so the betrayal at the end is a little more poignant. I wish I could be more help, but it's a difficult concept and I can't really think of too many ways to shift it without altering the plot itself. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 20:28, May 25, 2015 (UTC)