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The formatting wasn't the issue. We can fix that simply. The issue was the numbers punctuation, capitalization, wording, spacing, and story issues present in your story. I'd strongly suggest waiting for feedback. Posting it again will result in a one day ban. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:20, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
- Onto the spacing, don't indent paragraphs and you need to put a space between each paragraph. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 00:22, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
My apologies for responding late to your response to Lukas We Have To Talk. I also have Asperger's, and while the story does quite well explaining how I felt whilst going through several thousands of emotions, there were other contributing factors besides love life issues. I'd like you to consider the main drawback of Autism, which Asperger's is a very minor dose of... Autism breaks down barriers. You don't get to shut the doors of your mind to keep out any detail; you get everything, taking it all in, and often times its more than overwhelming. Thus was the inspiration for the story.
Also, thank you for the light review~