I loved your story the most -- it's probably the most pro of the lot. I'm assuming you got first place since you were first listed. Anyway, congrats on your win!--Mikemacdee (talk) 07:10, October 22, 2015 (UTC)
Well done on coming in first, I am happy for you. I also wanted to say that I hope you stick around here. Your story was great and got me laughing a bit, had no idea on that ending, which is extremely rare, and it was just well done overall. So you sure have some talent and I hope to see more from you here.
That's funny that you find yourself in the tant of America as well. I don't know how long it's been since I've gotten suckered down here, well I do, but it has been more than once. At the moment I am on a full on campaign to move out of this horrible state and back up north. Not sure where exactly you are located in Florida, but I have lived in Ocala and currently reside in Clearwater. Of the two I like Clearwater much better.
With luck I will be able to make it to TN before too long, just need to pay down the mortgage enough to be able to cover another. Anyway, sorry for going on about Florida, just read your profile and decided to respond about it. Good luck on your writing, and if you have anything you want so feedback on or if you feel like you need help with a piece, let me know and I will be happy to help.