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Vvmaxplays

aka Max S

  • I live in England
  • I was born on September 5
  • My occupation is Student
  • I am Male
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ClericofMadness (talk) 16:17, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

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There were widespread capitalization, punctuation, wording, formatting, and plot issues which resulted in it not being up to our quality standards. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:32, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

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EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:42, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re: Hermann T

I understand, and I provided a link to the writer's workshop (in the deletion message) where you can take the story to get feedback/help. Unfortunately in its current form with failure to properly capitalize sentences and proper nouns, format sentences (i.e. a large portion of your story is a wall-of-text), use proper punctuation, awkward wording, and plot issues (among other errors). Posting it now and trying to fix up the issues is not a viable strategy as there are too many problems (to the point that it doesn't meet the bare minimum of our quality standards) to be fixed in a matter of minutes. This is something that is going to require a lot of time, feedback, and attention to improve due to the widespread amount of problems present.

I would suggest using the writer's workshop if you plan on making an appeal. Please note that you do need to pass an appeal before the story can be uploaded. Re-posting it (even with corrections) without approval will result in a temporary ban from the site. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 16:50, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this still needs a lot of work. A lot of the capitalization (miss-capitalized words), punctuation (mis-use of punctuation/missing commas), wording (awkward wording/run-on sentences), and plot issues are still present (even adding some new typos in edited sections: "thinking it was his girlfriend I checked her profile her name e was Lynne C. "). I see you uploaded to the writer's workshop which is a step in the right direction, but I feel like you need to spend a lot more time taking their feedback into consideration and revising your story.
As it currently stands, it uses a lot of the same tropes as other stories, has a lot of mechanical issues, and plot inconsistencies. As it currently stands, this story is not up to quality standards and is going to need a lot more revision than just something powered through in a day. I would strongly advise taking your time and Dr. Bob and Bloody's advice into account.
A final note, please do not post entire stories onto talk pages as it tends to take up space. Simply including a link to the writer's workshop or a pastebin link instead of copy/pasting the entire draft. It takes time to revise a story and build an idea that separates itself from the other stories that follow the same plot points, this is something that is going to require days/weeks, not hours. Best of luck with your writing. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 21:48, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

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Additionally there were mechanical issues that present throughout the story that need revision. EmpyrealInvective (talk) 12:31, April 1, 2020 (UTC)

Story deletion

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DO NOT ATTEMPT TO REUPLOAD YOUR PASTA. If you upload it again, you'll receive a 1-day ban from editing, as per the rules.

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ChristianWallis (talk) 12:23, April 2, 2020 (UTC)

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