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Waffle Wednesday

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ClericofMadness (talk) 03:38, November 21, 2017 (UTC)

Hi, Waffle! I'm really intrigued by your story, but a lot of the plot elements are disjointed. For instance, I don't see how the pills relate to the situation. Are they causing Waffle's transformation? Are they supposed to stifle it? I think this needs a little more explanation, even if it's a guess by one of the characters.

Also, the main reason why it's M4R is because of the formatting. A lot of it is awkward and incoherent. Try establishing a set style for headings and titles that continues throughout.